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Maximus the Slave
Scene: Maximus has been abducted by the slavers, and is on the back
of one of their wagons. He is delirious, and drifting in and out of consciousness. We see his dreams:
The sun quickly traverses the sky...
Maximus sees himself floating across the ground...
A door in a whitewashed wall...
Walking through a field of corn...
Suddenly he hits his hand on a rock, and it jars him momentarily into
consciousness. He sees a Numidian above him lifting the lid off a
basket then placing it back again, as he drifts once more into unconsciousness
A white horse running...
White clouds skitting across a blue sky...
An animal - a bear? - above him...
The Numidian slave again...
Then, as he sees the next visions, a voice echoes through his
dream:
You will meet them again. But not yet.
A horse...
Himself in chains...
His family figurines clustered around a candle...
As he starts back to consciousness again, he looks to his shoulder
which must be painful, and sees the wound crawling with maggots. He
lifts his hand to knock them away but the Numidian tells him not
to because they will clean it.
Maximus glances around and sees another man riding a
camel nearby look at him with distaste, then he falls back to dreaming.
He wakes again, this time to see the Numidian chewing something, and
applying it to his wound, which seems cleaner now. The Numidian tells
him not to die because they will feed you to
the lions, they are worth more than we are.
This scene is the beginning of the friendship between Maximus and Juba
- while Maximus is unconscious, Juba is taking care of his wound,
keeping it clean and putting paste on it to help it heal. Meanwhile,
Maximus is bouncing between reality and his dreams, flitting between
the present, the past and the future. Once again we see him going to
his home: the gate, walking through the corn, at peace, though this vision
disintegrates as soon as he wakes up. What he makes of the dreams, if
indeed he remembers them later, is anyones guess.
Scene: At the Bazaar. The slaves sit chained to posts while the
trader tries to convince Proximo to buy his stock.
Throughout this scene, the first where we see Maximus properly
conscious since the murder of his family, he appears completely
dejected and uncaring. He ignores most of what is going on around him,
not even responding when Proximo notices his tattoo (prodding it must
have caused the wound to hurt, but he doesn't even seem to notice). He
doesn't react either, when Proximo suggests that he is a deserter,
just letting him believe it. In his view, the army life is past. He
looks up slightly as Proximo names his price, as though with detached
interest, but that is the only flicker of life we see from him in this
scene.
Scene: Proximo's School. The slaves have just been unloaded from
the wagon.
Again, Maximus displays very little emotion. He is surrounded by men
fighting, by exotic animals, and by rotting human corpses, but he
doesn't exhibit any sign of interest. His only movement is to remove
his vest at the behest of one of the men throwing lime on the new
slaves.
Scene: In the courtyard of Proximo's gladiator school, the new
slaves are being tested by the experienced fighters
Initially Maximus is sitting cross-legged with his eyes closed,
apparently lost in thought - perhaps thoughts of all that has
happened, or what the future holds. Most likely though, he is thinking
of his family, and the things he has lost. He seems lost in his
reverie, since it takes him a moment to react when Haken calls him by
his new nickname: Spaniard.
Eventually, he gets up and walks over to where Haken is waiting. There
is no nervousness or worry either in his demeanor, or in his face -
this is a man who knows how to fight, and who has no fear of Haken or
anyone else. He looks Haken full in the eye, then holding the sword by
its blade, he throws it to the ground. If his intention is to confuse
Haken it succeeds - the Big gladiator looks to Proximo for further
instructions: the man he is supposed to fight has refused, and is now
unarmed. But he is not refusing because he is afraid - he just won't
fight. As so many times in the film, this one gesture conveys far more
of Maximus's feelings and thoughts than any words could have done.
I could kill you here and now, if I chose. But I don't. And I
won't. For you, for Proximo, for anyone, or anything. My life may be
at stake, but I don't care. If you want to kill me, go ahead, but I
won't demean myself by fighting you just because someone wants me
to.
Maximus has spent his life fighting, but always for a cause: for Rome,
for Marcus, for his home and family, for honour. Now he is being asked
to fight for nothing more than because someone wants him to. And that
is not reason enough. By refusing to fight, Maximus risks being hit by
Haken, even being beaten at an order by Proximo, but nothing scares
him. All he wants is to be with his family in the afterlife, so he
will tolerate anything the world throws at him, But he won't just play
blindly along.
Proximo seems intrigues by the actions of this quiet slave: he shows
no fear of Haken, even once he is unarmed, and doesn't flinch as Haken
lifts his own sword. Maximus takes the blows as Haken makes them, but each
time he gets back up to repeat the challenge. He is prepared to die,
or face serious injury rather than fight: after all, he has nothing
left to live for. Everything that matters to him is in the afterlife
waiting.
Proximo sees the strength and courage in him, and prevents Haken doing
any serious damage -- perhaps sensing that there is something very
-- special within this man - something which will reveal itself in time.
Scene: Inside a building at the gladiator school. Maximus sits
cutting at the tattoo on his arm with a sharp stone. Juba crouches in
the doorway.
Maximus seems at peace with himself as his scrapes at his arm,
removing the evidence of his past. The tattoo, meant to remind him for
whom he fought (the Senate and People of Rome), seems completely
pointless now - he fights for no one, and couldn't even if he wanted
to. It is another part of his history which is best forgotten.
Juba asks him the obvious question:
Juba: Why don't you fight, Spaniard? We all have
to fight.
Maximus answers with nothing more than a glance, but that look reads
volumes:
What do I have left to fight for? My family are dead. The emperor I
served is dead, and his idiot of a son has taken over. I have lost my
command, my army and my freedom. For what should I fight? All I have
left is my honour. And that tells me not to fight merely for
fighting's sake.
Content that he's answered the question, he goes back to scraping at
his arm. Juba, however, is not content just to leave Maximus and
presses on, asking what he is doing:
Juba: Is that a sign of your gods?
Again, the only answer is in the form of a look. This one seems to say
Yes, for what it's worth.
Juba again presses:
Juba: Will that not anger them?
This time when Maximus looks up, there is humour in his
expression. Yes, it does. But what difference will that make? What
do I have to lose? They can do what they like - they already
have!
Then, as he goes back to cutting at his arm, we see the only
expression of how much it really hurts - he gasps, and some of the
pain shows in his face.
But why is he really cutting the tattoo away?
It's a sign of his old life, of everything he was and had. Perhaps a
reminder which is too painful to see and carry on him all the
time. Everything he values is now gone, so now, maybe, he feels that
he owes nothing to the Senate, or to the People of Rome. He gave them
everything, and all he got in return was agony and slavery. There
could also be a more practical reason, though given his state of mind
at this time it is unlikely: As an ex-soldier he must clearly know how
to fight. By giving hi enemies in the arena that knowledge, he loses
whatever slight advantage it may give him.
Scene: Walking to the small stadium in Zucchabar, the slaves are
chained to a log. They walk under newly-dyed red yarn, which drips
onto them.
Haken comments:
The gods favour you. Red
is the gods' colour. You will need their help today.
Again, Maximus seems underwhelmed. As far as he is concerned, the gods
have something against him - they have robbed him of everything he has
ever cared for. They certainly don't seem to favour him, and a few
drips from some yarn is not going to change that. He just walks on
without giving any reply.
Scene: In the holding area of the small arena, Proximo gives his
slaves a pep-talk.
Proximo: Some of you are thinking that you
won't fight. Some that you can't fight...
It seems possible that some of this is due to Maximus's display
earlier, when he refused to fight Haken. We see few of his reactions
to this talk, but it is probably fair to assume that he is only
half-listening. not really caring what Proximo has to say. So far, he
seems to think little of Proximo, this man who profits so much from
the deaths of others. Something in the talk reaches him though,
probably Proximo's closing line:
Ultimately we are all dead men. Sadly we
cannot choose how, but we can choose how we meet that end in order
that we are remembered as men.
While Maximus would seem happy just to walk into the arena and refuse
to fight, he must be aware that his death would count for nothing
under those circumstances, and he would be forgotten within
seconds. While his refusal to fight Haken showed courage and
determination, a similar refusal in the ring would illustrate only
stupidity. Even though he has little left to fight for, he still has
his honour, and he would rather die with that intact. The only way
that can happen, that he can die as a man (are being a man, and having
honour synonymous to Maximus?) is to fight. He sees that though he has
few choices left, one of them is how he dies - fighting with a sword
in his hand, or as nothing, barely even noticed. He also knows that he
is an exceptionally good fighter, and cam probably survive the fight,
should he choose to. We have never yet seen him give up on a fight he
could win, whatever the odds, and he seems unlikely to start now. A
line from earlier in the film echoes here:
Quintus: People should know when they're
conquered.
Maximus: Would you, Quintus? Would I?
While Maximus would happily die for many things, he is not a man who
would throw his life away for nothing, however low he feels.
We see the transformation from a slave who is unwilling to fight, to a
man who knows he can, as he completes his pre-battle ritual, lifting a
handful of dust, then thoughtfully running it from hand to hand, as
though still pondering the decision, then decisively rubbing it
between his palms. When he stands he is once again a fighter, prepared
for whatever may come. The difference in him is clear, both in his
posture and his face. Juba notices the difference in his partner, and
looks slightly surprised when Maximus stands up: One moment the man
was ready to die, the next he is focussed, concentrated and alert.
As the slaves are chained together, Maximus is immediately given the
same disadvantage as the other 'yellow` fighters - his right hand is
chained. For most fighters, this is enough to handicap them severely,
as it restricts their sword arms (not that any of the yellow fighters
have swords at this stage).
Maximus's experience and patience are once again clear as the men stand
waiting to enter the arena. Some seem nervous and fidgety, while others
including Maximus and Haken, merely stand and wait for the inevitable,
knowing there is nothing they can do until the gates open. They know
that allowing fear to take a hold will only hamper them. The look on
Maximus's face now is similar to that before the Battle of Germania -
Whatever I'm about to face, I'll meet it head on, as best I can. With
honour.
Scene: The gates to the arena open, and Maximus and the other
slaves rush out, ready to fight.
Since they are near the back of the line of fighters, Maximus and Juba
can move further into the arena to find andabatae to fight,
since the closer enemy have already been engaged. This gives them the
slight advantage of more space.
Many of the other yellow fighters are losing or dead by this point,
hampered by their inability to fight, their chained sword arms and
their lack of swords. Maximus, however, is not a normal yellow. He was
identified as one for dying by his refusal to fight, rather than any inability to
enter combat. As he is used to close combat, with men all around him
his is adept at fighting with any weapon, in either hand.
The first andabata he takes on quickly discovers this, as
Maximus sidesteps his sword thrust, then back-hands him around the head
with his shield. As this gladiator falls, Maximus takes his sword,
holding it reversed in his right hand, while he continues to fight
with the shield in his left.
Eventually, Maximus and Juba are left facing the only remaining
andabata. Maximus manages to relieve him of his trident,
reverses it, and then spears him with it, quickly backing away. As the
man they are fighting pulls the spear out of his body and turns it
back on Maximus and Juba, they work together to break his neck with
the chain between them.
As the crowd begins to cheer, Maximus and Juba look around. Maximus
seems almost confused and disgusted with what he has just
done.
again, between the end of this scene, and the next, we see the
contrast between Maximus - now a slave, dirty, exhausted, bloody - and
Commodus - the self-proclaimed emperor, clean, fresh, riding
into Rome in triumph. Again, it is Maximus who is cheered, while
this time most of the assembled crowd jeers and boos Commodus. Even
so, it seems at this point in the story, that Commodus is the one
in control, while Maximus seems to be lost. Still recovering from the
loss of his wife and son.
While in some ways the fates of these two men are still the same as
they were previously, in others their roles have been completely
reversed.
Scene: Maximus and the other slaves sit in a cage at the entrance
to the arena, preparing to fight.
This scene is notable as the only pre-battle scene were we don't see
Maximus complete his usual ritual with the sand to earth himself.
Maximus sits at the end of the cage farthest from the arena sharpening
his sword ready for the up-coming battle. When he is satisfied with
the blade, he stands, then quickly walks to the door to the arena. As
he passes them, the other fighters raise their weapons and salute him,
as his men did before the Battle of Germania. This time, he doesn't
acknowledge them, or stop to talk, but strides blankly past them,
focussing only on what lies ahead. The crowd too are calling for him:
Spaniard! Spaniard! Spaniard! echoes all round the arena and
the surrounding village, where people are standing on the hillside to
watch him fight.
Once through the gates and in the arena, Maximus pauses and bows to
his opponents. Perhaps he recognises that they are in a similar
situation to him "Kill or be killed" and he salutes them. Once he
begins to fight, it is clear that the others stand no chance - Maximus
finishes them off in turn, quickly, cleanly and efficiently, in a
matter of seconds.
Once he has finished, the crowd sits in stunned silence. Maximus in
unimpressed: He has given them what he thinks they want - blood and
death - and they just sit there. As his temper builds he flings his
sword into the crowd. When this also gets little response other than a
surprised murmur he turns on them directly.
Are you not entertained? ARE YOU NOT
ENTERTAINED? IS THIS NOT WHY YOU ARE HERE?
He has given the crowd what they wanted, done something that he had no
wish to do and for nothing. Maximus's shout betrays some of the anger
and guilt he must feel at the deaths of his family. Perhaps he sees
this fight as penance, seeking absolution for them in the blood of
others. The crowd, by their silence, do not grant him his wish. Only
when he throws his sword to the ground, spitting on it in disgust does
the mob wake from its reverie and begin to call to him.
I think that Maximus is upset in this scene because he has given so
much of himself - he is a disciplined man who does not fight to
display his skill or strength, he fights only when he must (as we saw
earlier at the gladiator school). He did not, in this situation, have
to fight for his life - while the other fighters may have killed him
if he had not fought them, the ease with which he dispatched them gave
him no pleasure - perhaps he was fighting other 'yellows' again? We
know nothing of the preparation for this fight, only that it gave
Maximus no pleasure and perhaps even caused him pain. At the end, even
with the crowd screaming for him, he seems like a man lost, in a world
he no longer comprehends; a world where men fight to the death, but
not for honour or love or loyalty, only for the entertainment of
others. It is not the fighting he is used to - organised, planned,
even in some ways elegant, but brutal and primitive - fighting to show
who is faster, stronger and more skilled.
His manner before the fight was not that of a man about to face an
enemy - more that of one about to slaughter an animal. He came across
as thinking "Lets get this over with", which is what he
did. This wasn't a battle, but a massacre - did he know before it
began that it would be so?
Either way, when it was over, he did not act like a man who had won a
fight, more a man who had lost his soul, or whatever was left of
it. He gave everything he had left, and got nothing in return.
Once he had finished fighting, Maximus was still full of pain and
hatred - the fight had done nothing to diminish these emotions, as
perhaps he had hoped it might. He threw his sword into the crowd
because he wanted to hurt them - he killed the men he fought so
quickly for the same reason - he was trying to release pain, hatred,
rage, guilt. Before he started fighting he was controlled. When he
finished he was using raw emotion - it showed on his face, in his
actions - he didn't just stab the last opponent - he beheaded him -
and in his voice when he shouted to the crowd. His emotions begin to
crystallise into contempt and disgust as he realises what he has done,
and why. When he got no response, he throws his remaining sword down as
if to say That's all you'll get - I will give you nothing
more. This is perhaps the only time in the film where we see
Maximus lose his temper - all the feelings he has buried surface
during this fight - the men he fought stood no chance against the
controlled fighter he started out as. By the time he finished
fighting the other gladiators, his hatred of the world, the gods, the people,
boiled at the surface of his emotions and was contained no longer. He
only begins to calm finally as the crowd call for him.
Scene: In Proximo's quarters
From the outset of this scene, we see that Maximus has little time
for his owner. He paces back and forth throughout, looking bored as Proximo talks to him.
As usual, when asked a question, Maximus ignores it. He has no
patience for small talk and is not interested in anything Proximo
offers. Not entirely surprising, since Proximo offers replacements of
what he has lost:
Proximo: What do you want, hmm? Girl? Boy?.
Maximus us still reeling from the loss of his wife and son. While many
of those watching this film see the offer of a boy as a joke, to
Maximus it is possibly a reminder of his son - later he refers to him
as "My boy". Either way, the words only increase Maximus'
intolerance of his owner. He acts as though Proximo hadn't spoken,
asking instead:
Maximus: You sent for me?
This scene has strong contrasts with Maximus's meeting with Marcus - he
opened both with the same words, though this time there is no
honorific when he addresses Proximo, as may be expected from a slave
to his master. As Proximo, ignoring Maximus's rudeness, continues,
Maximus remains unimpressed and uninterested. Proximo's praise falls on
deaf ears:
Proximo: You're good Spaniard, but you're not
that good. You could be magnificent.
For Maximus, even now, fighting it still a necessity, not an art
form. His answer sums this up:
Maximus: I am required to kill so I
kill. That is enough.
"I am prepared to do what I have to. Don't expect me to give anything
more." At this stage, killing is a way to survive, nothing more. So
far there is no end which requires him to do anything more than fight
to kill. He is being made to act on a stage - he will read the lines
but sees no reason to put time and effort into putting on a good
show. All this is changed by Proximo's next few lines:
Proximo: It's enough for the provinces, but
not for Rome.
The magic word has resurfaced, the word which keeps coming back to
haunt the man who was once her greatest
General: Rome.
Proximo: The young emperor has announced a
series of spectacles to commemorate his father, Marcus Aurelius. I
find this amusing since it was Marcus Aurelius the wise, the
all-knowing Marcus Aurelius who closed us down in the first
place.
More of the magic words from his past: Marcus Aurelius. Maximus'
friend, commander and adoptive father. The man he vowed to succeed. His
promise is coming back to haunt him, one piece at a time. Proximo's words
are enough to grasp his attention, though he barely lets it
show.
Proximo: So after five years of
scratching a living in flea-infested villages, we are finally going
back to where we belong: the Colosseum...
Maximus must realise that he is now going to where he belongs. Fate
has dictates that he should keep his vow to Marcus - in some way at
least. Perhaps he even hears Marcus's words echoing now: But you have not been there. You have not seen what it
has become..
However, there is much irony in such a thought: Marcus intended him to
enter Rome as Protector, the highest power in the land. Instead, he is
to go as a slave, the lowest of the low.
Proximo: Oh you should see the Colosseum,
Spaniard...
As Proximo speaks, it becomes clear that the trainer knows what he is
talking about. He ha been there, but not as a trainer or slave owner:
he has been a gladiator himself. Despite himself, Maximus is
interested.. He stops pacing, and watches Proximo, who is by now lost
in his recollection. A new respect for this man begins to
dawn.
Maximus: You were a gladiator?... You won
your freedom?
Proximo, sensing that he finally has the attention of the enigmatic
Spaniard, continues with his tale:
A long time ago the Emperor presented me with
a rudius. It's just a wooden sword... a symbol of your freedom. He
touched me on the shoulder and I was free.
A spark has just flared in Maximus's imagination - a while multitude
of things have come together: Marcus's request, a visit to Rome, a
chance to see Commodus face-to-face, a sword. Suddenly, Maximus's life
has gained meaning. If he can fight before Commodus, he can stand
before Commodus, with a sword. And if he can do that, he can kill
Commodus, to avenge his family. After that, he can join them in the
afterlife, happy that honour has been satisfied. He can't save Rome as
her Protector, but he can at least serve he by killing
Commodus. Mostly, though, he seeks revenge.
Happy to have found this idea, Maximus laughs as he asks
Proximo:
Maximus: You knew Marcus Aurelius?
He sounds slightly sceptical, but this may be because he does not
believe the luck that has given him this opportunity, rather than
because he doesn't believe Proximo.
Proximo seems angry at being questioned, and snaps back
Proximo: I did not say I knew him. I said he touched me
on the shoulder once.
Maximus steps closer to Proximo, no longer scornful of him, but
understanding that here is a man who can help him get what he
wants.
Maximus: You asked me what I want? I too want
to stand in front of the Emperor, as you did.
Proximo senses the change in Maximus - more likely believing that he
wants the fame and celebrity of meeting the Emperor, not to mention
winning his freedom, than for his real reasons - and takes the
opportunity to get his message across:
Proximo: Then listen to me. Learn from me. I
was not the best because I killed quickly. I was the best because the
crowd loved me. Win the crowd and you will win your freedom.
Proximo has heard Maximus's change in tone, from his stubborn refusal
to do anything more than kill to his eagerness in wanting to meet the
Emperor. Presumably Proximo stands to make more money from a popular
gladiator than an efficient one, but he also sees something of himself
in this man. Proximo seems stubborn too, and it is this which leads
him to single out Maximus - he can see that the former soldier is
someone special and wants him to use his talents rather than wasting
them. Finally, Maximus straightens, standing to attention as he did
before Marcus. It is at this point that Maximus makes the transition
from a slave who fights because he has no choice, to a gladiator who
fights to further an end - suddenly killing is no longer enough.
I will win the crowd. I will give them
something they have never seen before.
Maximus must win the crowd, but not to win his freedom in the conventional
sense. He must free himself from his guilt and pain at the deaths of
his wife and son. He must free himself of his vow to Marcus by
ensuring that Commodus cannot rule. He sees his end, but can now see the purpose of his life. All that has happened before is irrelevant: He
lives only to kill Commodus.
Maximus can so something which will echo in eternity.
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